HOMEWORK: What is your best birthday memory?
학생이 쓴 원문
My best birthday memory is that that my friends sang a birthday song to me.
When I arrived at school, it was very touching that my friends sang a birthday song to me.
And thank you for singing a happy birthday song in Korean!!
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia! :)
When I arrived at school, it was very touching that my friends sang a birthday song to me.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
My best birthday memory is that that my friends sang a birthday song to me.
>> My best birthday memory was when my friends sang the birthday song to me.
When I arrived at school, it was very touching that my friends sang a birthday song to me.
>> When I arrived at school, I was touched when my friends sang me birthday song.
And thank you for singing a happy birthday song in Korean!!
>> And thank you for singing me the happy birthday song in Korean, teacher.
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