HOMEWORK: What is your favorite holiday festival in your country? And why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Seollal(New Year\'s Day in the lunar calendar) is my favorite holiday festival in my country.
Because I can see relatives after a long time.
It is happy to have dinner with my relatives.
And when I make a New Year\'s bow to my grandparents, they give me advice and New Year\'s cash gifts.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
It is happy to have dinner with my relatives.
And when I make a New Year\'s bow to my grandparents, they give me advice and New Year\'s cash gifts.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Seollal(New Year\'s Day in the lunar calendar) is my favorite holiday festival in my country.
>> My favorite holiday festival in my country is Seollal or the New Year\'s Day in the lunar calendar.
Because I can see relatives after a long time.
>> Because I can see my relatives after a long time.
It is happy to have dinner with my relatives.
>> I\'m so happy to have dinner with my relatives.
And when I make a New Year\'s bow to my grandparents, they give me advice and New Year\'s cash gifts.
>> And whenever I make the New Year\'s bow to my grandparents, they give me advice, cash and gifts.
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