Homework-What is your insight about legalizing marijuana?

Actually it is very disputable to say my opinion. But I don't gree about legalizing marijuana. Even though it can make money for government to legalize marijuana like cigarette, marijuana has potential of risks too much. First, marijuana can be a medium to activate other drugs. Once people are poisend, they want to get more stonger things and try to find something new. Thesedays, people who especially live in big-city suffer from mental disease. In this situation, if marijuana is legal, it will be first step to spread out lots of drugs. Secondly, teenager are usually interested in some bad things. Although smoking is illegal for teenager,they can get cigarette and try to smoke. Because they can easily see the adult who smokes in front of them and then they are familar with smoking. I think that marijuana will make a same situation. As a result many of student may get problem about drugs. Sometimes something can be usuful but very dangerous. Therefore we should do a careful choice.

Hi there my dear!   Good to read your opinion regarding the topic. I agree with you and I am totally not in favor of legalizing marijuana. Well, as you\'ve said, it could result in many negative consequences. There might be advantages but the disadvantages cannot be overlooked. Thanks for the effort. Kindly check the corrections below. See yah!   ~Teacher Shanee   Actually it is very disputable to say my opinion. >>> OR: Actually, I was really unsure whether to say my opinion.But I don\'t gree about legalizing marijuana. >>> Correct!Even though it can make money for government to legalize marijuana like cigarette,marijuana has potential of risks too much. >>> Even though, leagalizing marijuana like cigarette is profitable for the the government, it has a lot of potential risks.First, marijuana can be a medium to activate other drugs. >>> Correct!Once people are poisend, they want to get more stonger things and try to find something new. >>> Once people are addicted, they want to get hold of stronger things and try to find something new. Thesedays, people who especially live in big-city suffer from mental disease. >>> These days, people who live in a big city suffer from mental diseases. In this situation, if marijuana is legal, it will be first step to spread out lots of drugs.>>> In that situation, legalizing marijuana can be the first big step to spread out illegal drugs. Secondly, teenager are usually interested in some bad things. >>> Secondly, teenagers are usually interested in some bad things. Although smoking is illegal for teenager,they can get cigarette and try to smoke. >>> Although smoking is illegal for teenagers, they still have their ways to get cigarettes and try to smoke. Because they can easily see the adult who smokes in front of them and then they are familar with smoking. >>> One reason why they do that is they easily see adults who smoke anywhere and they think that it is also cool to follow. I think that marijuana will make a same situation. >>> I think that legalizing marijuana will result in the same situation. As a result many of student may get problem about drugs. >>> Another consequence is that many students may suffer from drug addiction.Sometimes something can be usuful but very dangerous. >>> Sometimes, things can be useful but are very dangerous.Therefore we should do a careful choice. >>> Correct! >>> OR: Therefore, we should choose carefully.