HOMEWORK: What is your worst birthday memory?
학생이 쓴 원문
My worst birthday memory was when my close friend forgot my birthday.
So, she didn\'t bring my birthday present.
She brought it the next day.
She gave me a lipstick.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia! :)
So, she didn\'t bring my birthday present.
She brought it the next day.
She gave me a lipstick.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
My worst birthday memory was when my close friend forgot my birthday.
>> My worst birthday memory was when my close friend forgot about my birthday.
So, she didn\'t bring my birthday present.
>> So, she didn\'t bring my birthday present with her.
She brought it the next day.
>> CORRECT!
She gave me a lipstick.
>> CORRECT!
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