HOMEWORK: What kind of success do you want in the future in your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two things I want to success.
First, I want to be an elementary school teacher.
Second, I want to save some money.
And I want to go on a family trip with the money.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia! :)
First, I want to be an elementary school teacher.
And I want to go on a family trip with the money.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
There are two things I want to success.
>> There are two things I want to successful at.
First, I want to be an elementary school teacher.
>> CORRECT!
Second, I want to save some money.
>> CORRECT!
And I want to go on a family trip with the money.
>> And I want to go on a family trip using that money.
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