HOMEWORK: What kinds of flowers do you like? How would you feel if someone give you a flower.?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like white rose most and when someone give me a flower, I feel very happy and excited.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji An,
Flowers have a long-term positive effect on moods. They make an emotional impact on humans, providing consideration and comfort. Flowers have many powers beyond beauty and emotions. Receiving flowers demonstrated a higher sense of enjoyment and life satisfaction because lowers make intimate connections. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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I like white rose most and when someone give me a flower, I feel very happy and excited.
>> I like the white rose most and when someone gives me a flower, I feel I\'m special, very happy and excited.
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I like white rose most and when someone give me a flower, I feel very happy and excited.
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