HOMEWORK: What’s good or bad about having packed lunches?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s bad because it\'s hard to packed lunch and it can go bad if it\'s old.
But on the other hand, it\'s good to packed lunch becuase we can bring homemade food.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji An,
Lunches provide energy and nutrients to keep the body and brain working through the afternoon. Packing a lunch can give you more control over what foods you are eating when it comes to foods you may be allergic to. Carrying food from home is less expensive, more convenient, more hygienic, and meets individual requirements despite the fact that packed lunches are time-consuming and tiring to many parents or students like you because it\'s hard to prepare food to bring. Just don\'t skip meals Ji An
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I think it\'s bad because it\'s hard to packed lunch and it can go bad if it\'s old.
>> The bad thing about packed lunches is it\'s hard to be prepared and it\'s a waste of time for me as well as the food will spoil if you keep it because humidity, temperature, and spoilage bacteria can all affect both the safety and quality of the food.
But on the other hand, it\'s good to packed lunch becuase we can bring homemade food.
>> But on the other hand, it\'s good to pack lunches because we can bring homemade food, and packing lunch allows you to have more control over the types of food you enjoy at your mid-day meal.
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I think it\'s bad because it\'s hard to packed lunch and it can go bad if it\'s old.
But on the other hand, it\'s good to packed lunch becuase we can bring homemade food.
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