homework "What's the best music genre?"
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Hi Jane! I ag[이름], the music I listen to is based on my moods too! :)
Well I don\'t think that there\'s \"best\" music genre at all.
>>Well, I don\'t think that there\'s a best music genre at all.
Because music genre is so wide taht I can\'t pick only one best genre.
>>Because music\'s genre is so wide that I can\'t pick just one.
When I\'m sad. Jazz is the best genre for me. Because I think Jazz is also a little bit sad so Jazz comforts me.
>>When I\'m sad jazz music is the best music for me. But I also think jazz sounds a bit sad but still comforts me.
And I think classic is also outstanding genre as well.
>>And I think classical music is an outstanding genre as well.
It\'s inexplicable but there\'s somnething special in Classic.
>>It\'s inexplicable but there\'s something special about classical music.
There\'s a vraiety of music in these days.
>>There\'s a variety of music these days.
So during the time to go my office I always try to listen various music every day :)
>>So when I am on my way to the office I always try to listen to different kinds of music.
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