Homework : What’s the best place you’ve ever visited?
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I can remember the great places that I\'ve ever been.
>> I can remember the great places that I\'ve been to.
To visit these places positively influences my mind.
>> Correct
So I will talk about that and explain about my good memory.
>> I will talk about that and share some good memories.
The greatest place for me is the Boracay, one of islands in Philippines.
>> The greatest place for me is Boracay, one of the islands in the Philippines.
Two years ago, I went to the island with my family.
>> Correct
We were surprised how beautiful it is.
>> We were surprised how beautiful it was.
Especially, There were several spots that we loved.
>> We especially loved several spots.
First attraction is the White beach, one of the popular beaches in Boracay.
>> The first attraction is the White beach, one of the popular beaches in Boracay.
I was significantly impressed when I saw the sunset in the pub where were located on the beach.
>> I was significantly impressed when I saw the sunset in the pub which was located on the beach.
The second greatest place is the Thailand.
>> The second greatest place is Thailand.
The place is the my first international place and I had many impressive experiences.
>> This place was the first place I have visited abroad and I had many impressive experiences.
There are strange appeal that I can\'t explain exactly why I visited ten times.
>> The place has a strange appeal to me and that\'s why I\'ve visited this country ten times already.
The Thailand has great night markets and unbelievable natures.
>> Thailand has great night markets and unbelievable natural attraction.
Honestly, I also love to drink in the pub on the Kaosan road.
>> Honestly, I also love to drink in a pub on Kaosan road.
When I get there, I feel that my tension is rising and I really like to listen to live music in there.
>> When I go there, I feel that my spirits are rising and I really like to listen to live music there.
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