HOMEWORK: What thing will you not give to anyone? why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a lot of things. These are very useful and necessary. Also I have things that didn\'t use anymore. Lately I give things someone. These things are I didn\'t use but someone can use.
I think that I don\'t have things not give anyone. Things are things. Things are human made. I can\'t take anything when I die. Even the most expensive things I can\'t take it. So I can give everything. But I can\'t give that I am still using it.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [Name]!
I am glad that you are thinking this way.
In America, some people are suffering from \"HOARDING DISORDER\" where they can hardly throw things that make their house elook like trash. We can talk about this later.
Aki~
I have a lot of things.
>> CORRECT!
These are very useful and necessary.
>> CORRECT!
Also I have things that didn\'t use anymore.
>>> Also, there are things that I don\'t use anymore.
Lately I give things someone.
>>> Lately, I gave someone some of my things.
These things are I didn\'t use but someone can use.
>>> These are things that I didn\'t use, but someone can use.
I think that I don\'t have things not give anyone.
>>> I think that I don\'t have anything not give anyone.
Things are things.
>> CORRECT!
Things are human-made.
>> CORRECT!
I can\'t take anything when I die.
>> CORRECT!
Even the most expensive things I can\'t take it.
>>>Even the most expensive things I can\'t take them.
So I can give everything. But I can\'t give that I am still using it.
>>> I can give everything except those things that I am still using.
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