(Homework)What was the last thing you did that made you feel so much better?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that i got the chance to admission of KDI School
At that time i was very happy and told my wife it directly.
This reason is that i can take a course about master of degree courses like pubic policy, public management, economics
Actually i don\'t have experience about that.
As i am taking these courses at KDIS, i could broad my specific intelligence and make international relationships.
In addition, when i need to learn about English increasingly, i met my you(Trixia) fortunately.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you for sharing! I appreciate your words about me. :)
Please review the corrections. Remember that clear sentence structure and correct word choice make your ideas easier to follow.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
1. I think that i got the chance to admission of KDI School
-- I think that I got the chance to be admitted to KDI School.
2. At that time i was very happy and told my wife it directly.
-- At that time, I was very happy and told my wife directly.
3. This reason is that i can take a course about master of degree courses like pubic policy, public management, economics
-- The reason is that I can take master’s degree courses such as public policy, public management, and economics.
4. Actually i don\'t have experience about that.
-- Actually, I don’t have experience in that.
5. As i am taking these courses at KDIS, i could broad my specific intelligence and make international relationships.
-- As I am taking these courses at KDI School, I can broaden my knowledge and build international relationships.
6. In addition, when i need to learn about English increasingly, i met my you(Trixia) fortunately.
-- In addition, when I needed to improve my English, I fortunately met you (Trixia).
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