HOMEWORK: When is the best day to take a day off? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
i think best day is not. because everyday i s a best day.
but if i have choose day. it\'s best when i am tired after work.
or weekend when everyone else is off.
so i think how i can meet my friend.
when do yo lest? i change every week.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Eve!
I like how you asked a question at the end. Your writing sounds like you are trying to connect with the person who\'s reading it ^^ Good job!~
Chammy
i think best day is not. because everyday i s a best day.
>> I think there is no such as the best day because every day is the best day.
>> I think there is no such as the best day because every day is the best day.
but if i have choose day. it\'s best when i am tired after work.
>> But if I have to choose a day, it is best when I am tired after work.
>> But if I have to choose a day, it is best when I am tired after work.
or weekend when everyone else is off.
>> Or on the weekends when everyone else is off.
>> Or on the weekends when everyone else is off.
so i think how i can meet my friend.
>> So, I can think of meeting my friends.
when do yo lest? i change every week.
>> So, I can think of meeting my friends.
when do yo lest? i change every week.
>> When do you rest? For me, it differs every week.
OR
>> When do you take your rest? It varies for me each week.
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