Homework-which do you prefer to enjoy food, at the restaurant or home?

2016-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Composition Writing: Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. These days I prefer to cook and eat food at home. There are some reasons. Firstly I can save money if I have a meal at home. The price of food outside is getting more expensive. For example, I am into a pasta. I can make three times if I cook my favorite pasta by myself with same cost. Second reason is that I can make and enjoy food with my taste. I love shrimp so I can put more shrimp if I want to at home. Third one is that it makes me more comfortable by making & enjoying food with my people at home. Therefore, I prefer to prepare and eat food at home.

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Hello [이름]!   Thank you for answering the composition topic.   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   These days I prefer to cook and eat food at home. There are some reasons. Firstly I can save money if I have a meal at home.The price of food outside is getting more expensive. For example, I am into a pasta. I can make three times if I cook my favorite pasta by myself with same cost. >> I prefer to cook and eat at home these days because of a few reasons. First, I can save money if I eat at home since the price of food bought outside is getting more expensive. For example, a plate of pasta bought at a restaurant has the same cost as three plates of pasta cooked at home.   Second reason is that I can make and enjoy food with my taste. I love shrimp so I can put more shrimp if I want to at home. >> Second is that I can tailor the food according to my tastes. I love shrimp and if I cook at home, I can add more shrimp if I wanted.   Third one is that it makes me more comfortable by making & enjoying food with my people at home.Therefore, I prefer to prepare and eat food at home. >> My third and last reason is that it is more comfortable for me to cook and enjoy meals with my family.

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