Homework: Which do you think is better, adopting pets or buying pets? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think adopting pets are more better because buying pets cost a lot of money.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mark! I am so glad you did your homework. You were able to answer the question. However, your homework was too short. Please try to express
yourself more next time. You can do it!
- Teacher Debbie
>> I think adopting pets is better because buying pets costs a lot of money.
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