Homework-Which knowledge is more important, in book or experience?

2016-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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COMPOSITION WRITING: It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? I think both knowledge are important in our life. But if I choose just one, I want to say knowledge from experience is more important. Usually the knowledge from experience can be related to our life directly. By living life, we can learn & apply them. And knowledge from my friends or people around me is more familiar to accept. Because it is from the environment in my life. Of course, we do a variety of activities as much as we can, we can learn more diverse lesson from them. That is why I said that knowledge from life is more important.

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Hello [이름]!   Here you go.   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I think both knowledge are important in our life. But if I choose just one, I want to say knowledge from experience is more important.Usually the knowledge from experience can be related to our life directly. By living life, we can learn & apply them.And knowledge from my friends or people around me is more familiar to accept. Because it is from the environment in my life.Of course, we do a variety of activities as much as we can, we can learn more diverse lesson from them.That is why I said that knowledge from life is more important. >> I think that knowledge gained from books and experience are both important in our lives. Although, if I had to choose one, I think that knowledge from experience is more important because we can apply the knowledge learned directly in real life situations. My friends and the people around me who tell me of their experiences are easier to accept because they might have similar experiences as I have. Of course there are differences but we can still learn from them. That is why hands-on experiences is more important for me.

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