HOMEWORK: Which part of your childhood do you wish you could change?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I younger periods, I had have to live in ill-harmonious vibes.
I had almost always been feeling so gloomy.
I had crying many times, and I wanted to get out from my parents.
But, I think that I should have studied more enthusiastic that period.
If I would have studied more well, I could have been living better now.
강사 첨삭
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Not all people are born with a silver spoon; however, our past molded us to become better people. Fighting!
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When I younger periods, I had have to live in ill-harmonious vibes.
>>> When I was younger, I lived in an ill-harmonious vibe.
I had almost always been feeling so gloomy.
>>> CORRECT!
I had crying many times, and I wanted to get out from my parents.
>>> I cried many times, and I wanted to get out of my parents\' house.
But, I think that I should have studied more enthusiastic that period.
>>> But, I think that I should have studied more enthusiastically during that period.
If I would have studied more well, I could have been living better now.
>>> If I had studied better, I could have been living better now.
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