HOMEWORK: Who are the people you can always count on when you feel like chickening out?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I feel dejected and feel like chickening out, I find my parents. My dad and mom, even my aunt are really devoted to me, which makes me feel reliable and relieved. They are the people I can always count on, although it\'s not easy to see them as much as I used to do when I was a kid. Of course, I can sometimes talk with my friends to get advice and have the guts, since I have more in common with them in terms of a generation and interests. However, I don\'t feel as comfortable opening up to my friends as I do to my parents. Thus, I\'d like to cherish the moments I share with my family and make as many memories with them as I can before I leave Korea this year.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
It\'s beautiful that you want to focus on making wonderful memories with them before your upcoming move. ^^
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
When I feel dejected and feel like chickening out, I find my parents.
~ When I feel dejected and feel like chickening out, I turn to my parents.
My dad and mom, even my aunt are really devoted to me, which makes me feel reliable and relieved.
~ My dad, mom, and even my aunt are really devoted to me, which makes me feel secure and relieved.
They are the people I can always count on, although it\'s not easy to see them as much as I used to do when I was a kid.
~ They are the people I can always count on, although it\'s not as easy to see them as it was when I was a kid.
Of course, I can sometimes talk with my friends to get advice and have the guts, since I have more in common with them in terms of a generation and interests.
~ Of course, I sometimes talk with my friends to get advice and find the guts, since I have more in common with them in terms of generation and interests.
However, I don\'t feel as comfortable opening up to my friends as I do to my parents.
~ CORRECT.
Thus, I\'d like to cherish the moments I share with my family and make as many memories with them as I can before I leave Korea this year.
~ CORRECT.
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