Homework : Who takes care of the money in your house?

Hi Allen!

Please try to make your compositions as simple as possible.

Writing longer sentences won\'t guarantee a clearer expression.

Simplicity is always the best.

~~ Teacher Sharon

My family supplies income from only my work.

>> My family\'s income comes only from my work.
 However, most couples in Korea earn money both and they manage their budget each other.

>> However, most families in Korea already have a two-income household and they manage the budget together.
My case is a little bit special in Korea.

>> My situation is not the norm in Korean society.
So I will explain about a normal case and talk about my situation.

>> I will talk about the popular situations and my own as well.
First of all, I will talk about common families in my country.

>> Correct
For a long time, the number of couples who work both has risen.

>> Over time, the number of families with both parents working has increased.
The proportion of families who manage their income each other increase as much as these trends maintain.

>> Because of this trend, it stands to reason that both husband and wife also manage their money together.
Secondly, I will talk about my unusual case in detail.

>> Correct
As I mentioned, I have been working only in my family and we spend our income together.

>> As I mentioned, I have been working alone in my family.
Therefore I immediately transfer left income to my wife every month after I pay for credit card and saving.

>> After paying off my credit card and saving some money, I give whatever is left of my income every month to my wife.
During the moment I record the situation how much I spend money for credit and saving.

>> I also keep a record of all my expenditures.
And then I don’t care how my wife manages the left income because it needs to respect her privacy.

>> I let my wife manage the remaining income as she wishes as a sign of respect for her privacy.