Homework with Korean History.

Dear [이름],

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          Thanks a lot again for making your homework! ^^

          By the way, I agree with you that the three qualities are essential for a person to be a good leader. In my opinion, the most important quality is sense of leadership. A leader should know how to control and guide his or her people. Without leadership, his or her other qualities will be useless.

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... Teacher [이름]a ... ^.~

I think that there are three important qualities of a good leader.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I think there are three important qualities that a good leader possesses.

First is a leadership, second is a capacity, and last is an intelligent power.

>> First is leadership. Second is capacity. Last but not the least is intelligence.

>> OR: First is sense of leadership. Second is capacity. Last but not the least is intelligence.

First important qualities of a good leader is leadership.

>> The first important quality of a good leader is leadership.

>> OR: The first important quality of a good leader is sense of leadership.

The leader can something when she or he has leadership.

>> The leader can do something when he or she has leadership.

So she or he can lead people who support and not support he or she.

>> Therefore, he or she can lead people who support and don\'t support him or her.

Second important qualities of a good leader is capacity.

>> The second important quality of a good leader is capacity.

If the leader has not a capacity, there will lots and lots of dissident factions.

>> If a leader has no capacity, there will be lots and lots of dissident factors.

Then leader couldn\'t control them.

>> Then, the leader can\'t control them.

Last important qualities of a good leader is intelligent power.

>> The last important quality of a good leader is intelligence.

Leader must cope with problems like enemy\'s provocations.

>> A leader must cope with problems like enemies\' provocations.

Ifnot the country would die out.
>> If not, the country would die.

Korean History #2

37 B.C, a prince of Booyu named Jumong escape from Booyu and built Goguryu at Jolbon.

>> In 37 B.C., a prince of Booyu names Jumong escapes from the kingdom and built Goguryu at Jolbon.

In 18 B.C, the price of Goguyru named Onjo escape from Goguyru and built Sipje(=>Becje).

>> In 18 B.C., the prince of Goguryu named Onjo escaped from the Kingdom and built Sipje, which is also called Baekje.