Homework with Korean History

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I think that there are three characteristics.

>> CORRECT!

The first characteristics is cooperation mind.

>> The first characteristic is cooperation.

The second is consideration.

>> The second is consideration.

And the last is to work hard.

>> The last is work hard.

The first characteristic is cooperation mind.

>> The first characteristic is cooperation.

We can make sunergy effect when we have cooperation minds.

>> We can make synergic effect when we cooperate well to our co-workers.

If we don\'t have it, the time that we need will extend.

>> If we don\'t have it, the time of doing what we need to finish will extend or will be longer.

That\'s not a good work......

>> That\'s not a good work...

The second characteristic is consideration.

>> The second is consideration.

If we don\'t have consideration, maybe worker will have discord.

>> If we don\'t have consideration, our co-workers might discord.

They place of work will only left cold.

>> The workplace will be left cold.

The last characteristic is to work hard.

>> The last is work hard.

We can make lots of profit when we work hard.

>> CORRECT!

If not, workers will be a poor people.

>> If not, workers will be poor people.

Also, when we work hard, our country will develop.

>> In addition, when we work hard, our country will develop.

Korean History #3

>> CORRECT!

Goguyru occuied north part of Korean peninsula and Machuria.

>> Goguryeo occupied the northern part of the Korean peninsula and Manchuria.

However, Beckje occupied the southwest part of Korean peninsula, Sinla occupied the southeast part of the Korean peninsula.

>> However, Baekje occupies the southwest part of the peninsula, while Silla occupied the southeast part.

They developed with the iron, rice king and law.

>> CORRECT!