Homework work work:( kkkk :)!!
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YES! YES! We do NOT want to stop improving:)
As I wrote about the topics you gave me these days, I feel like I'm taking a philosophy class. It always takes some time to draw up the composition.
And regarding today's subject, I never thought once that success can be disastrous. In fact, I can't come up with any situations that success can be tragic. Being success means that you achieve your goals so when I think of success, only positive things come to my mind.
Have a great day, Rose!!:)
Bye:)
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Hi there, [이름]! Ha! Ha!
I never thought it would be like Philosophy class^^
Anyways, those are the deeper topics we need to delve into^^
Whoa! I can not wait to talk with you later!
Thanks for answering my philosophical questions^^
Have a great day!
YES! YES! We do NOT want to stop improving:)
>>CORRECT!
>>Absolutely yes! We do not want to settle in mediocrity.As I wrote about the topics you gave me these days, I feel like I\'m taking a philosophy class.
>>As I wrote about the topics you gave me these days, I feel like I\'m taking Philosophy class.
It always takes some time to draw up the composition.
>>CORRECT!
>>It takes some time to formulate conclusions.And regarding today\'s subject, I never thought once that success can be disastrous.
>>And regarding today\'s topic, I never thought once that success can be disastrous.
>>And about the topic for today, I never thought once that success can be detrimental.
In fact, I can\'t come up with any situations that success can be tragic.
>> In fact, I can\'t come up with any situation that success can be tragic.
Being success means that you achieve your goals so when I think of success, only positive things come to my mind.>>Being successful means that you have achieved your goals so when I think of that, only positive things come to my mind.Have a great day, Rose!!:)
>>CORRECT!Bye:)
>>CORRECT!
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