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2014-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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YES! YES! We do NOT want to stop improving:) As I wrote about the topics you gave me these days, I feel like I'm taking a philosophy class. It always takes some time to draw up the composition. And regarding today's subject, I never thought once that success can be disastrous. In fact, I can't come up with any situations that success can be tragic. Being success means that you achieve your goals so when I think of success, only positive things come to my mind. Have a great day, Rose!!:) Bye:)

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Ha! Ha! I never thought it would be like Philosophy class^^ Anyways, those are the deeper topics we need to delve into^^ Whoa! I can not wait to talk with you later! Thanks for answering my philosophical questions^^ Have a great day! YES! YES! We do NOT want to stop improving:) >>CORRECT! >>Absolutely yes! We do not want to settle in mediocrity.As I wrote about the topics you gave me these days, I feel like I\'m taking a philosophy class. >>As I wrote about the topics you gave me these days, I feel like I\'m taking Philosophy class.  It always takes some time to draw up the composition. >>CORRECT! >>It takes some time to formulate conclusions.And regarding today\'s subject, I never thought once that success can be disastrous. >>And regarding today\'s topic, I never thought once that success can be disastrous. >>And about the topic for today, I never thought once that success can be detrimental.  In fact, I can\'t come up with any situations that success can be tragic. >> In fact, I can\'t come up with any situation that success can be tragic.  Being success means that you achieve your goals so when I think of success, only positive things come to my mind.>>Being successful means that you have achieved your goals so when I think of that, only positive things come to my mind.Have a great day, Rose!!:) >>CORRECT!Bye:) >>CORRECT!

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