HOMEWORK: Write a composition about your favorite activity with your parents.
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강사 첨삭
I have
to my plan in usually with my parents.
>> I have
a usual plan that I follow with my parents.
first,
we woke up slowly during the day.
>>First, we wake up
slowly during the day.
OR
>>In the morning, we first get up gradually.
ans we order iunch by elivery (my mom and i am not good at cooking)
>>Then, we order lunch for delivery (my mom and I are not good at cooking).
OR
>>Since
my mom and I are not good cooks, we order lunch for delivery.
after digesting watched tv, we go for a walk with my dog to
park neast my house
>>After eating, we watch TV and then go for a walk with my
dog to the park near my house.
after
a long walk outside l come back home, when the sun goes down
>>After a long walk, we come back home when the sun goes
down.
it\'s plan is my favorite plan.
>>This plan is my favorite.
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