Homework : Write a short essay about the points that mak difficult part in learning english.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, sheila.
I am doing my homework.
I think the points that make difficult part in learning english are words, tense and article.
In case of words, I have to memorize them. And I have to train to speak english thinking about tense. Article needed to study grammer.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름] Ho! You did great with your homework!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
OR>>I do my homework.
I think the points that make difficult part in learning english are words, tense and article.
>>I think the parts that are difficult in learning English are words, tenses, and articles.
OR>>I think the points that are difficult in English are vocabulary, tenses and articles.
In case of words, I have to memorize them.
>>CORRECT
And I have to train to speak english thinking about tense.
>>And I have to train myself to speak in English while thinking about the tenses.
Article needed to study grammer.
>>Articles are needed in studying the correct grammar.
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