Homework: Write about the most famous places in your city.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my city the most famous places is Gyeongbokgung Palace. Gyeongbokgung Palace is in Seoul. If you go to There you can see historic building and you can know about Korea history.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Sunny! Thank you for doing your homework. However, your answer was quite short. Please try to express yourself
more next time.
- Teacher Debbie
In my city the most famous places is Gyeongbokgung Palace.
>> In my city, the most famous place is Gyeongbokgung Palace.
Gyeongbokgung Palace is in Seoul.
>> This is a good sentence.
If you go to There you can see historic building and you can know about Korea history.
>> If you go there, you can see historic buildings, and you can learn about Korean history.
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