[Homework] Write an essay. Can you tell me what you are doing before a big exam the next day?

2015-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

There is some jokes about posture for preparing a exam. For example, It is someone's story before a exam the next day. After He comes home, he say that he would study after only eating a dinner. And then he have some food and he say that he would study after only watching a TV for a little time. And then he say that he would that he would study after only sleeping for a minute. Finally, It is growing light. He say that he should study for a break time before the exam. He bomb the test in the end. But in my experience, I was up all night studying for a exam. Because I didn't want to mess up a exam and my effort for a semester. I think that once we face a problem, we should do our best to solve the problem.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Jun and thank you for doing your homework!^>^ I have made the necessary corrections and noticed that your article \"a\" was used in a wrong way. Remember that \"an\" is used if the next word starts with a vowel sound like \"exam\". See you again next time!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ There is some jokes about posture for preparing a exam. >> There are some jokes about the proper posture to prepare for an exam. For example, It is someone\'s story before a exam the next day.>> For example, I will mention someone\'s story before an exam the next day.After He comes home, he say that he would study after only eating a dinner.>> After he came home, he said that he would study after only eating dinner.And then he have some food and he say that he would study after only watching a TV for a little time.>> Then after eating, he said that he would just study after watchint TV for a short time.And then he say that he would that he would study after only sleeping for a minute.>> Then he said that he would just be studying after sleeping for a minute.Finally, It is growing light. He say that he should study for a break time before the exam.>> Finally, the light gew. He said the he would just study during his break time before the exam.He bomb the test in the end.>> He bombed the test in the end.But in my experience, I was up all night studying for a exam.>> But in my own experience, I was up all night studying for the exam.Because I didn\'t want to mess up a exam and my effort for a semester.>> I didn\'t want to mess up with my exam and didn\'t want to waste my effort for a semester.I think that once we face a problem, we should do our best to solve the problem. >> Correct.

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