HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Describe the best character from your favorite movie. Why do you conside
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My favorite movie actor and character is The Vin Diesel. Because he always tries to overcome trials and tribulations and maintain his current life.
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Hi [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for expressing your thoughts on this topic.
It\'s always good to hear what you have to say.
Take note of how we balance sentences by using the same preposition.^^
>> Teacher Sharon
My favorite movie actor and character is The Vin Diesel.
>> My favorite movie actor and character is Vin Diesel.
Because he always tries to overcome trials and tribulations and maintain his current life.
>> It\'s because he always tries to overcome trials and tribulations and to maintain his current lifestyle.
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