HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Do you stay in touch with all of the friends you’ve made? How do you do
학생이 쓴 원문
I have made many friends so far. However, now I am in contact with about 10 close friends, and I maintain a steady relationship with these friends.
Hi Sharon~!!
I\'m currently thinking about coming up with an english name for myself.
can you recommend which one is better name Silas or Emmett?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
I will give you my choice in class.
I think both names are good but they give opposite vibes.
Let\'s discuss later.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have made many friends so far.
>> Correct
However, now I am in contact with about 10 close friends, and I maintain a steady relationship with these friends.
>> Correct
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