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Writing Task: If given the chance to take another Major in the university, what major will you take and why?
If I can choose my major, I want to major in architecture. Because I have been interested in architecture since when I saw the Opera House, in Sydney. From that moment, I wanted to be a great architect. But I liked car design more than architecture so I chose my current major.
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Writing Task: If given the chance to take another Major in the university, what major will you take and why?
If I can choose my major, I want to major in architecture.
>>If I can choose another major, I want to take major in architecture.
Because I have been interested in architecture since when I saw the Opera House, in Sydney.
>Because I have been interested in architecture since I saw the Opera House in Sydney.
From that moment, I wanted to be a great architect.
>>CORRECT!
OR>That moment made me realize that I wanted to be a great architect.
But I liked car design more than architecture so I chose my current major.
>>But I like car design more than architecture that\'s why I\'ve chosen my current major.
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