HOMEWORK: Writing Task: Do people in your town or city often complain about tourists?

2021-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I think, there is too many stairs in the subway stations in korea, so tourists are uncomfortable with carrying luggage. And there are no trash can. It\'s also inconvenient.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon [이름]! 
That is really inconvenient! 
I would just carry a small bag - hahaha. 

I think, there is too many stairs in the subway stations in korea, so tourists are uncomfortable with carrying luggage.
>>> There are so many stairs at the Korean subway station that it would be inconvenient for travelers to carry their luggage.
And there are no trash can. 
>>> CORRECT! 
It\'s also inconvenient.
>>> CORRECT! 

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