HOMEWORK: [Writing Task] What do you like most about winter?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like snowy day most about winter.
If snowy I can make snowmans and I can throw snowball.
Also I can sledding. My favorite winter activity is sledding.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Su[이름]!^^
Just like you, many people appreciate snowy days because of the serene, bright environment, nostalgic childhood hobbies (sledding, snowmen), and freedom to unwind.
They can also enjoy winter sports or comfortable interior activities, which provide a unique sensory experience and a refreshing break.
Thank you for answering your homework.
See you later!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
I like snowy day most about winter.
>>> I like snowy days the most in the winter.
If snowy I can make snowmans and I can throw snowball.
>>> If it\'s snowy, I can make a snowman, and I can throw snowballs.
Also I can sledding. My favorite winter activity is sledding.
>>> Also, I can go sledding. My favorite winter activity is sledding.
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