HOMEWORK: Writing Task: What would you say is the cheapest way to get around your town or city?
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If you want to the cheapest travel, you should collect much information about local republic transportation and high cost-effective restaurants .
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That is true [이름]!
But looking for information about the cheapest restaurants and places are hard to find - hahaha.
If you want to the cheapest travel, you should collect much information about local republic transportation and high cost-effective restaurants .
>>> If you want the cheapest travel, you need to collect a lot of information about local transportation and cost-effective restaurants.
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