HOMEWORK: Writing Task: Who are your favorite actors and actresses? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite actor is Chris Hemsworth.
He has good shape and so hot.
And he is the opposite of my husband\'s shape.
강사 첨삭
Hi again [이름]!
Hahaha- same here.
Our husbands are actually out of shape - hahaha.
My favorite actor is Chris Hemsworth.
>>> CORRECT!
He has good shape and so hot.
>>> He has a good shape and so hot.
OR: He has a nice figure and is too hot.
And he is the opposite of my husband\'s shape.
>>> CORRECT!
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