Homework~!!:X
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you An!
~Teacher Lucy
When I was [이름], I wanted to be a firefighter.
>>CORRECT!
Because I have seen the situation that they extinguish a fire.
>>Because I have seen the situation where they extinguish fire.
It was impressive to me.
>>CORRECT!
So I think fire volunteers are cool.
>>CORRECT!
They sacrifice a lot without reward a lot and they satisfied.
>>They sacrifice a lot without rewards and they are satisfied.
If they had not sacrificed, it would have been impossible to put out wildfire in Australia.
>>CORRECT!
That much I respect them.
>>CORRECT!
If I had the chance, I want to volunteer in abroad.
>> If I had the chance, I want to volunteer abroad.
Of course, it\'s good to volunteer in my country.
>>CORRECT!
But I think if I volunteer in abroad, it will give me more experience and the chance to improve.
>> But I think if I volunteer abroad, it will give me more experiences and chances to improve.
So I want to volunteer in Africa or Australia
>>CORRECT!
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