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학생이 쓴 원문
1.
I think The reason honesty is important because we are humans.
But you don\'t have to be honesty.
Of course, sometime honesty might be a hassle and it\'s hard to keep one\'s honesty.
If when someone is not honesty, it can make human relationships better or it can make better gains.
Therefore, you can be honesty according to the situation or not too much.
However, it should not be excessive.
2.
If I have been dishonest with someone, I felt uncomfortable.
Koreans have to use garbage bags when throwing away garbage.
But garbage bags are more expensive than general bags,
So many Koreans don\'t use garbage bags well.
And it is illegal not to use garbage bags
One day, when my mom also didn\'t use garbage bags, I told her \"Even though no one else uses it, so we should at least use it.\"
Finally, if you are not honest with important behavior, you may regret it.
강사 첨삭
Thank you An!
~Lucy
I think The reason honesty is important because we are humans.
>>I think the reason of honesty is important because we are humans.
But you don\'t have to be honesty.
>>But you don\'t have to be honest.
Of course, sometime honesty might be a hassle and it\'s hard to keep one\'s honesty.
>>CORRECT!
If when someone is not honesty, it can make human relationships better or it can make better gains.
If when someone is not honesty, it can make human relationships better or it can make better gains.
>>If someone is not honest, it can make human relationships better or it can make better gains.
Therefore, you can be honesty according to the situation or not too much.
>>Therefore, you can be honest according to the situation or not too much.
However, it should not be excessive.
>>CORRECT!
If I have been dishonest with someone, I felt uncomfortable.
If I have been dishonest with someone, I felt uncomfortable.
>>CORRECT!
Koreans have to use garbage bags when throwing away garbage.
Koreans have to use garbage bags when throwing away garbage.
>>CORRECT!
But garbage bags are more expensive than general bags,
But garbage bags are more expensive than general bags,
>>CORRECT!
So many Koreans don\'t use garbage bags well.
So many Koreans don\'t use garbage bags well.
>>CORRECT!
And it is illegal not to use garbage bags
And it is illegal not to use garbage bags
>>CORRECT!
One day, when my mom also didn\'t use garbage bags, I told her \"Even though no one else uses it, so we should at least use it.\"
One day, when my mom also didn\'t use garbage bags, I told her \"Even though no one else uses it, so we should at least use it.\"
>>CORRECT!
Finally, if you are not honest with important behavior, you may regret it.
Finally, if you are not honest with important behavior, you may regret it.
>>CORRECT!
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