HOMEWORK~!!XD
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When I was [이름], I was going to home. Suddenly, I was knocked over by someone. And it was dark on the street, and he was black.
He got angry and told me something. But I didn\'t understand because I was scared of him.Since that day, I thought negatively about black people. Sometime when I saw black people, I was scared of them and I ignored them. But It is very bad thinking and It\'s racism.
It\'s bad thinking negatively about the whole black people because of one black. So I\'m talking with my foreign friends every day and I try to understand the culture of other countries. Lastly, We have to reduce racism by understanding and communicating.
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Thank you an!
~Teacher Lucy
When I was [이름], I was going to home.
>>When I was [이름], I can remember the time I was going home.
Suddenly, I was knocked over by someone.
>>CORRECT!
And it was dark on the street, and he was black.
>>CORRECT!
He got angry and told me something.
He got angry and told me something.
>>CORRECT!
But I didn\'t understand because I was scared of him.
>>CORRECT!
Since that day, I thought negatively about black people.
>>CORRECT!
Sometime when I saw black people, I was scared of them and I ignored them.
>> CORRECT!
But It is very bad thinking and It\'s racism.
>>But it is bad thing to do and it\'s racism.
It\'s bad thinking negatively about the whole black people because of one black
It\'s bad thinking negatively about the whole black people because of one black
>>It\'s bad thinking negatively about the whole black people because of one black person did to me.
So I\'m talking with my foreign friends every day and I try to understand the culture of other countries.
>>CORRECT!
Lastly, We have to reduce racism by understanding and communicating.
>>CORRECT!
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