homework (Yoonha)
학생이 쓴 원문
My country\'s hero is sun shin -lee .
He was the general of korea.
He won in the war with japan in ocean.
and he made a big boat named turtleship .
He was awesome general in korea and many people respect him until now.
and his huge figure is in the seoul square.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sarah!
I have heard this story before.
You have given a lot of details.
That is very commendable.
Never stop trying.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My country\'s hero is sun shin-lee.
>> A hero in my country is Sun Shin-lee
He was the general of korea.
He was the general of korea.
>> He was a general in Korea.
He won in the war with japan in ocean.
He won in the war with japan in ocean.
>> He won the war against Japan out in the ocean.
and he made a big boat named turtleship .
and he made a big boat named turtleship .
>> He built a big boat which was called \"turtle ship.\"
He was awesome general in korea and many people respect him until now.
He was awesome general in korea and many people respect him until now.
>> He was an awesome general in Korea and many people have respected him until now.
and his huge figure is in the seoul square.
and his huge figure is in the seoul square.
>> There is a huge figure in his image in Seoul Square.
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