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2023-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Please answer the question: What do you think are the things you need to buy for your family? I want change the old air conditioner in my house The reason is that it doesn\'t work well because it is an old air conditioner, and it\'s too big but, these days come out is small . So, change the air conditioner because I want to spend every hot summer cool.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Please answer the question:
What do you think are the things you need to buy for your family?

I want change the old air conditioner in my house.

>> CORRECT!
The reason is that it doesn\'t work well because it is an old air conditioner,

>> The reason is that it doesn\'t work well because it is an old air conditioner.

and it\'s too big but, these days come out is small .

>> And it\'s too big, but these days the air coming out is not enough.

So, change the air conditioner because I want to spend every hot summer cool.

>> So, I want to change the air conditioner because I want to spend cool days in summer.

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