Homework0203

2021-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

Q. Who should be better at cooking, husbands or wives? A. There is many a male chef in Korea. It is about one out of ten. As you know, there are the most male chef in the world. So I think that husbands are better at cooking than wives. Especually, for their family. Thank you see you. I\'ll take a your class tomorrow morning. So I so sad. But I hope you understand me. I have to go to the hospital with my son at early morning, because my son has a reservation examination. See you the day after tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this, and for notifying me about the class. Yes, I understand. See you next class then.
- T. Beth
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There is many a male chef in Korea. 
>>>  There are many male chefs in Korea.  
It is about one out of ten. 
>>> correct   
As you know, there are the most male chef in the world.
>>>  As you may know, there are mostly male chefs in the world.  
So I think that husbands are better at cooking than wives. 
>>> correct   
Especually, for their family.
>>>  Especially, for their family.  
Thank you see you.
>>> Thank you. See you!   
I\'ll take a your class tomorrow morning. 
So I so sad. 
>>>  I can\'t take your class tomorrow morning, so I am quite sad.
>>> OR:  I won\'t be able to take your class tomorrow morning, so I am quite sad.    
But I hope you understand me.
>>> correct   
I have to go to the hospital with my son at early morning, because my son has a reservation examination.
>>> OR: I have to go to the hospital with my son early in the morning because my son has a reservation examination.   

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