Homework0205
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What sports do you play?
A.
As you konw , we\'re now in step 2.5 of social distancing and wearing a mask is mandatory. If we don\'t wear a mask, we must pay fine of 100,000won($100). And we can\'t play any sports actually anywhere. Because we never gather over 5 persons. The meal hour is until 9 o\'clock. So I usually go to workout at the gym in my company for an hour.
I play golf with my colleague or friends sometimes. I love it. And sencond sports is Billiards. After work, I often get there with my colleague to relieve stress from my boss.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this.
-T. Beth
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As you konw , we\'re now in step 2.5 of social distancing and wearing a mask is mandatory. >>> As you may know , we\'re now in security level 2.5 of social distancing and wearing a mask is mandatory.
If we don\'t wear a mask, we must pay fine of 100,000won($100).
>>> If we don\'t wear a mask, we must pay a fine of 100,000won($100).
And we can\'t play any sports actually anywhere. Because we never gather over 5 persons.
>>> Also, we can\'t play any sports actually anywhere because we never gather for over 5 persons.
The meal hour is until 9 o\'clock. So I usually go to workout at the gym in my company for an hour.
>>> The meal hour is until 9 o\'clock and I usually go workout at the gym in my company for an hour.
>>> The meal hour is until 9 o\'clock and I usually go workout at the gym in my company for an hour.
I play golf with my colleague or friends sometimes. I love it.
>>> correct
And sencond sports is Billiards.
>>> The second sports is Billiards.
After work, I often get there with my colleague to relieve stress from my boss.
>>> correct
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