Homework0208

2021-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Q.Do you think it\'s better to go to the gym to workout or to do sport? A. I think that It is better to go ro the gym to workout alone these days. Because more then 5 people can\'t gather together and do sport anywhere. So these day, I always go to the gym to workout in my company at lunch time. Eating to lunch is boiled egg 2 and drink friuts juice. This year I was 50. So I have to workout for my healthy. Thank you for your help. Have a nice day. See you in the morning.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this. Keep them coming.

- T. Beth

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I think that It is better to go ro the gym to workout alone these days. Because more then 5 people can\'t gather together and do sport anywhere.

>>> I think that it is better to go to the gym to workout alone these days because more than 5 people can\'t gather together and/to do sport anywhere.

So these day, I always go to the gym to workout in my company at lunch time.

>>> So these days, I always go to the gym to workout in my company at lunch time.

Eating to lunch is boiled egg 2 and drink friuts juice.

>>> I eat 2 boiled egg and drink fruits juice for lunch.

This year I was 50. So I have to workout for my healthy.
>>> This year, I turned 50 so I have to workout for my health.
Thank you for your help.

>>> correct

Have a nice day.

>>> correct

See you in the morning.

>>> correct

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