Homework0209
학생이 쓴 원문
Q.What is the most popular sport in Korea? Why do you think it is popular?
A.
The most popular sport in Korea is baseball. The second thing is Golf.
When it starts, I get to the baseball ground to cheer. The team I rooting is Sam sung Lions from childhood.
And The reason why it is popular, because anyone can do that and shout loudly, enjoy seeing there without separatin of man, women and children.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]! Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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The most popular sport in Korea is baseball. >>> correct
The second thing is Golf.
>>> correct
When it starts, I get to the baseball ground to cheer.
When it starts, I get to the baseball ground to cheer.
>>> correct
The team I rooting is Sam sung Lions from childhood.
>>> The team I am rooting for is Samsung Lions since my childhood days.
And The reason why it is popular, because anyone can do that and shout loudly, enjoy seeing there without separatin of man, women and children.
>>> And the reason it is popular is because anyone can do that and shout loudly, enjoy seeing there regardless if they are men, women and children.
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