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2021-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Q.How can you be more trustworthy? A. The way I can be more trustworthy is not cheat each other. It is important to be hoest with each other. Truthful story, an act of truth and then I could be more trustworthy anther peple. Just I thought. Thank you sir.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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The way I can be more trustworthy is not cheat each other. 
>>>  The way I can be more trustworthy is not cheat each other.    
It is important to be hoest with each other. 
>>It is important to be honest with each other.    
Truthful story, an act of truth and then I could be more trustworthy anther peple. 
>>> To be honest, an act of truth could make me more trustworthy to other people.    
Just I thought. Thank you sir.
>>> I just thought, \"Thank you Sir.\"

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