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학생이 쓴 원문
Q. > How do you want to spend your holiday?
A. As holiday, i think just take a rest for full time. I want to watch TV, movies and excercise, etc. But I can\'t take a hoiliday leisurely like other peoples. Because I have many of big dreams this year. So I have a plan to have to master English language within this year, so i need to help you. right?
Before that, I mostly traveled to anywhere with my family, the place where is the famous restaurat, sightseeing spot and sea.
Lastly, I\'ll study English very hard for cometrue my dream within a year.
Thank you, sir.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this. It will be hard work, but if you are determined, everything is possible. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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As holiday, i think just take a rest for full time.
>>> As for holidays, I think I would just take a full rest at home.
>>> OR: For holidays, I just want to spend the whole day taking a rest at home.
I want to watch TV, movies and excercise, etc.
>>> I want to watch TV or movies, exercise, etc.
But I can\'t take a hoiliday leisurely like other peoples. Because I have many of big dreams this year.
>>> But I can\'t take a holiday leisurely like other people because I have many big dreams this year.
So I have a plan to have to master English language within this year, so i need to help you. right?
>>> So I have a plan to master English language within this year and I would be needing your help.
>>> OR: So I have a plan to master English language within this year and you will help me, right?
Before that, I mostly traveled to anywhere with my family, the place where is the famous restaurat, sightseeing spot and sea.
>>> Before that, I mostly traveled anywhere with my family to places where there\'s a famous restaurant, sightseeing spot and sea.
>>> Before that, I mostly traveled anywhere with my family to places where there\'s a famous restaurant, sightseeing spot and sea.
Lastly, I\'ll study English very hard for cometrue my dream within a year.
>>> Lastly, I\'ll study English very hard for my dream to come true within a year.
Thank you, sir.
>>> Thank you, ma\'am.
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