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Q.What should you prepare for this time of year?
A. I should prepare spring cloths, blanket for this time of year. Because the winter season is gonig and the sping season coming. Many peoples are such like that.
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Thank you for this Sir [이름].
I should prepare spring cloths, blanket for this time of year. Because the winter season is gonig and the sping season coming.
>>> I should prepare spring cloths and blanket for this time of the year because the winter season is leaving and the spring season is coming.
>>> OR: I should prepare spring cloths and blanket for this time of the year because the winter season is about to end and the spring season is coming.
Many peoples are such like that.
>>> OR: Many people do that.
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