Homework0301
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Q. Where do you usually go to eat out?
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> The place where I usually go to eat out is \'삼겹살(pork belly)\' restaurant for unlimited refill. It is cheaper than other them, the price is 14,000won for per person, only have to pay once. Of course, you have to pay for drink the Soju and beer partly. If we are paid once, we need not to pay more, and then we can eat it for unlimited for 2 hours. So I usually go there to eat out with my family, colleagues , friends.
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The place where I usually go to eat out is \'삼겹살(pork belly)\' restaurant for unlimited refill.
>>> correct
It is cheaper than other them, the price is 14,000won for per person, only have to pay once.
>>> It is cheaper than other restaurants. The price is 14,000won for per person and I only have to pay once.
Of course, you have to pay for drink the Soju and beer partly.
>>> Of course, you have to pay for drinks like Soju and beer separately.
If we are paid once, we need not to pay more, and then we can eat it for unlimited for 2 hours.
>>> If we are paid once, we need not to pay more, and then we can eat it for unlimited amount for 2 hours.
So I usually go there to eat out with my family, colleagues , friends.
>>> correct
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