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2021-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Q. Do you usually treat people out for a meal? A. Of course, I usually treat people out for a meal. But now, just like before I often can\'t do that. Neverthless, I am treating my family and close friends for a meal regularly. If I have a celebrate someone around me, I have to treat them. Especially, family, friends and my colleagues. There are many of celebration, those are birthday, anniversary and promotion. And when I want to talking about a work with boss, I treat him for a dinner with Soju and Beer.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this Sir [이름]!

Of course, I usually treat people out for a meal.

>>> correct

But now, just like before I often can\'t do that.

>>> correct
Neverthless, I am treating my family and close friends for a meal regularly.

>>> Nevertheless, I am treating my family and close friends for a meal regularly.

If I have a celebrate someone around me, I have to treat them.

>>> If I have a celebration for someone around me, I have to treat them.

>>> OR: If I have to celebrate for someone around me, I have to treat them.

Especially, family, friends and my colleagues.

>>> Especially family, friends and my colleagues.

There are many of celebration, those are birthday, anniversary and promotion.
>>> There are many kinds of celebrations like birthdays, anniversaries and promotions.

And when I want to talking about a work with boss, I treat him for a dinner with Soju and Beer.

>>> And when I want to talk about work with my boss, I treat him out for dinner with soju and beer.

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