Homework0304
학생이 쓴 원문
Q.Do you think you deal with your anger well?
A
No, I don\'t think so. Because I often get angry with my family, as I don\'t know myself what to do. A long time later I used to regret why I did it.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir [이름]!
>>> correct
Because I often get angry with my family, as I don\'t know myself what to do.
>>> OR: Because I often get angry with my family, as I don\'t know what to do myself.
>>> OR: Because I often get angry to my family, as I don\'t know what I am doing myself.
A long time later I used to regret why I did it.
>>> OR: Then later, I end up regretting what I did.
>>> OR: Then after some time, I end up regretting what I did.
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