Homework0309
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Q. Among all the things you own, which one is most special for you?
A. I have a most special thing which one is old coin. It means Korean money coin are made by Korea bank . It is still making them now.
There are special coins as 500won which is made in 1998. Those are made in limited amount 5,000 at that time.
So I have two coin. If I was sold it to a collector, I wiil get pay about ￦1,500,000won. It\'s USD 1,500.
That is most my special things.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir [이름]. That\'s a valuable possession then.
>>> I have one special thing which is an old coin.
It means Korean money coin are made by Korea bank.
>>> It means, Korean coins are made by the Korean bank.
It is still making them now.
>>> correct
There are special coins as 500won which is made in 1998.
There are special coins as 500won which is made in 1998.
>>> There are special coins such as the 500won which was made in 1998.
Those are made in limited amount 5,000 at that time.
>>> Those were made in a limited amount of 5,000 pieces at that time.
So I have two coin.
>>> So I have two coins.
If I was sold it to a collector, I wiil get pay about ￦1,500,000won.
>>> If I were to sell it to a collector, I would get pay about ￦1,500,000won.
It\'s USD 1,500.
>>> correct
That is most my special things.
>>> That is my most special thing.
Thank you.
>>> correct
That is most my special things.
>>> That is my most special thing.
Thank you.
>>> correct
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