Homework0829
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi,
I did homework.
Would you please check the attatchment?
There is the homework in it.
thanks.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Stella! You are indeed a good listener! I\'ve also noticed how you always smile in our classes. ^^ Thank you for taking time to do your homework today. Have a great day ahead. See you next week!
~T. Jewel
I think the best personality traits are carefully listening and response with smiling.
>>I think my best personality traits are being a good listener and responding with a smile.
I\'m going to write my case, because I think most people are similar with my thoughts.
>>I\'m going to write about my case because I believe many people share similar thoughts.
They make me comfortable and I can have a conversation more naturally.
>>They make me feel comfortable, allowing me to have conversations more naturally.
Also I feel like to make a friend like these person.
>>I also feel like I would like to make friends with people like them.
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