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Hi Logan! Wonderful composition. Thank you for being honest with your answer. I\'ve learned a lot about your friend just by this essay. You did great on this one, actually. You were mindful of your tenses and was able to use the right ones. Keep up the good work! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I am a university student and my friends are too.

>>Correct

So I don\'t know about office life.

>>Correct

But my friend is a national maritime museum intern employee.

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And I heard a lot of her complaint.

>>And, I heard that she has a lot of complaints.

She hates her manager.

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He is so bossy and lazy.

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I heard he didn\'t do anything but maked her to do everything.

>>I heard that he didn\'t do anything but instead, made her do everything. 

For example, clean all desk, empty trash can and feed to fishes.

>>For example, clean all desks, empty trash cans and feed the fish.

I think the most important thing in the office is lunch.

>>Correct

But she couldn\'t eat what she wanted.

>>But, she couldn\'t eat what she wants. 

The menu of the lunch always depends on his choice.

>>Their lunch menu always depends on his choice. 

If he wants to eat noodles, all employees in her team have to eat noodles.

>>Correct

And some childeren maked her angry.

>>And some children made her angry.

They yelled at the museum and ran.

>>They yelled and ran at the museum.

But she couldn\'t do anything because they were guests.

>>Correct

The most hard thing was fishy smells.

>>The hardest thing is the fishy smell.

>>The hardest thing is the noxious smell.

The museum has many fishes and she has to mange them.

>>The museum has many fish and she has to manage them.

But its smells are disgusting.

>>But the smell is disgusting.

She was bothered by paperworks too.

>>She is bothered with a lot of paperwork too.

She must report essays to her professor everyweeks.

>>She must submit essay reports to her professor every week.